The animatic we've done was introduced to Luke and the rest of the classroom. As it is a no developed project or test-run of our video we needed some feedback so then we can change some ideas and interpret audience's reaction on colours, sound etc.
Here are some comments regarding our animatic:
1. dancing fits with the track, the shadow “cross dissolve effect”, the repetitive image looks different- do even slower the jumping part
2. strong performance as Jen is very confident in herself!
3. considering ballet jumps: try to develop more, more different movements
4. think about the location and mis-en-shot in the dance studio or studio, maybe the shot with 2 dancers and a cello players is too complicated and all these don't fit in it
5. cellist looks good and nice, cools out the track, links with the music, pulls out the sound when we’re watching it in very strong way
6. there must be no outside part, colourist it was a huge clash instead of this use indoor backgrounds!
7. door shots move away from ecstatic visual style, too naturalistic, can try different colour grades
8. cello justify the ballet
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